Scene 1Ted and Theo and Ollie drive up to container. They stop, leave car and Theo and Ollie carry boxes in following Ted. Ted opens container door. They all go in. Ollie starts getting to work and Ted hits him around the back of the head.
Ollie: Again?
They leave.
Scene 2
Two policemen waiting in car and having a casual conversation.
Add lib.
Police 1: Wait... Is that them? That's them! Picks up the radio. Go! Go! Go! Go! Go!
Friday 24 January 2014
Monday 20 January 2014
Changes to our Thriller
After pitching our final idea to Matt we decided to make some final changes.
We decided that we wouldn't require a van to bring the drugs to a warehouse, instead the drug operation is run from a container which is a lot more interesting and adds to the suspense.
We also discussed the best way to lead the audience into thinking that the police are outside the right container.
There was also the discussion of how best to portray the smuggling of narcotics whether the container is full of the same boxes or if the gang smuggle multiple different things such as weapons or art.
We decided that we wouldn't require a van to bring the drugs to a warehouse, instead the drug operation is run from a container which is a lot more interesting and adds to the suspense.
We also discussed the best way to lead the audience into thinking that the police are outside the right container.
There was also the discussion of how best to portray the smuggling of narcotics whether the container is full of the same boxes or if the gang smuggle multiple different things such as weapons or art.
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